Sunday, 17 July 2011

"Allen Bridge" blog #22...

It's been the best part of two weeks since I got to the end of the script (I've been busy editing on the Abortion-themed educational DVD), so today - having a break from editing - I returned to Act III to bring it up to Draft 1.2 standard.

The script was 115 pages long, but in the re-drafting today I've managed to cut out three pages of extraneous description and dialogue, and then add in half a page's worth of information that pertains to Ryman's part of the denouement.

Still some re-drafting left to do at this stage though (the aforementioned denouement, and the coda).

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