In 2010 I wrote a screenplay called "
Summer Road", which was submitted to the BBC Writersroom and got a full read-through. It's important to note that getting a full read-through at the Writersroom is a tough ask in itself. They get 10,000 scripts a year and kick back the vast majority after a mere 10 pages - regardless of whether you agree with their system and approach to vetting unsolicited screenplays or not, those are the breaks when it comes to the Writersroom - so, point being, getting a full read-through is not exactly a common occurrence there.
Anyway - I've returned to this comedy drama to give it a bit of a bashing around to bring it up to my current screenwriting standard - and then put it out to a couple more places and bank it before advancing onto the next screenplay project I have in mind (
which won't be feature length, by the by) ... after which I'm planning on seeking out an agent.
So that's future plans, but right now I've just started the re-writing process on
Summer Road (
Draft 4.1) - I'm at page 20 (
of 107, currently) and so far the biggest changes have come to a handful of flashback sequences. In the previous incarnation of the script I was
telling more than I was
showing, so I'm reversing that situation and re-writing it according to my current standard.
It has been a good 18 months since I touched this screenplay and I'm able to weed out bits that no longer work, or which feel too '
on-the-nose', while adding a few more flourishes here and there. A key aim will be to re-work the entire second act - re-aiming the focus of the plot - and hopefully bring the page count down. 90 pages would be lovely, but I don't think I can tell this story quite that tightly (
you don't want to hack and slash at the expense of your script after all) - but I'll be looking to try and get closer to that figure, even if the page count has - for the moment - packed on a couple of pages up front.
I think it will take a good couple of deep passes to do everything to it that I want to do, but it's kind of nice to head back to this script after spending so long on
Allen Bridge, which I'm immensely proud of, but it's a good change of pace. That said, I'm also really looking forward to what I have planned for my next new screenplay and what will come after that - as I've aluded to above.